Well, I’ve finished self-editing the 400 page tome that is Star Lost. I’ve just sent the PDF off to a couple of friends who agreed to look it over. When I get their comments digested in about a month I’ll see if Colin is still up for layout duty, or if I’ll be on my [...]
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I’ve just finished the editing and revision of the Star Lost text through page 205 (of ~399). There is a wavery light at the end of the tunnel, and I don’t feel the tell-tale vibration of an oncoming train. Got some more editing done on Star Lost. I’ve finished the first third of Off the Streets (Chapter 3, up to p106) and am about to start on the second third. Some moderate changes in this last section, to fix some problems propagated from previous revisions. The most major being an overhaul of the Social [...] Got up to page 66 self-edited now. Not too many changes or problems. I’ve still got a lot to go, but it’s coming along. I’d like to finish up soon so my new year resolution can be “get Star Lost published”. I’ve finally finished entering the 15 sample characters I created into the manual. I had them each done up in excel worksheets for the five paces so I could keep track of them all, but the format for the excel sheets was to spacey to use in the manual (each character for each pace would [...] I could use some extra grey matter around here. Well, this past Saturday we went to an egg decorating party at Joe and Karen’s place. It was a lot of fun. We got to see Dan and MK, who we don’t get to see enough, and meet some new people who were very nice. Kaylin found a new friend in a girl named Ananda. [...] The second Character from the gameplay demo, Jefferson Leeds. Martha was worked up originally as a Pace 2 character for inclusion in the narrative demo you may remember from a previous post. Here she is younger and at Pace 1. This guy is an adaptation of ’s Steven Johansson. I had to come up with the background as Colin was never able to flesh him out. |
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